This is a well laid out character outline. The only criticism I have is you might want to tone down his age just a tad. For a man with immense agility he's quite old for his age. You might want to try at least early thirties or late twenties. Hope that helped. Good luck writing
every body has their own opinion and i respect your. my sister also likes sao more than re zero
its just my opnion that i like subaru and love watching him solving problem and getting torcherd.