The Atmosphere

[SAO LILDOOP]

Title: The Atmosphere

 

"It's like hell on earth" I once heard someone say, 

"Earth, what's that?" I replied... 

You see, the moment my eyes opened I died,

the rest of my life is just the decay. 

Normal folk would tell you I lied,

but how 'bout you make up your own mind? 

If by the end, when you draw your last breath

you agree with me, that this is no death, 

tell me how you feel. 

You feel glad, you feel gay? 

Maybe your honest enough to openly reel, 

due to the fact that you are the devil, 

admit it, you like being evil, 

we all do, after all, we originated in hell. 

And as you're corpse flies upon the breeze

don't you forget these, your wicked pleasantries. 

A red vapor, blood-red mist, an angel of light, 

from hell you now take flight. 

I'll see you again tonight, 

forecast is rainy, guess I'll fly a kite. 

Its the least I can do to subdue you from becoming dew, 

let your last color be blue; it's enough, what you've been through. 

 

Freedom is my friend, 

to no imaginary God will I bend. 

In the end my own chest I'll rend, 

and in my hand I'll hold my petrified heart, 

and I'll squeeze every last drop for me, myself and I. 

Alright, its time to fly, lets take to the sky, 

hell looks so far away from so high, 

but what's this I hear, sounds of joy? 

I've breached the clouds, now the stars gaze upon me, 

The sounds of merriment grow louder increasingly, 

I cannot stop, cannot return, its getting hot, I can see the ozone, 

the sun glares at me disapprovingly as he turns and disappears, 

my skin tingles feverishly, an airless environment awakening my deepest fears, 

the atmosphere engulf's my flesh and victoriously sneers. 

Was hell looking down on us all along, quietly listening to our indignant song?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[Faeding]

My favorite line is " Hell looks so far away from so high ". Makes me think about people judging those they see beneath them. That it's easy to disassociate and blame...when you yourself are not crawling in the mud

 

[SAO LILDOOP]

12 hours ago, Faeding said:

My favorite line is " Hell looks so far away from so high ". Makes me think about people judging those they see beneath them. That it's easy to disassociate and blame...when you yourself are not crawling in the mud

 

Thank you for the comment, it makes me very happy to see people really thinking about what I write and finding meaning.  It inspires me to write more.