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Death Metal Lyrics for a song about Suicide


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Initiation of Death 

I look around at the bodies around me, broken bones scattered in pieces behind me 
I am spiraling down 
I am falling down 
In my head I have fallen to death 
I’m no longer alive in my head 

The battlefield feeds my hunger to kill 
As I drown in my own blood as did my life skills 
Cause now in my head I am no longer alive 
In my head I have fallen to death 
In my head I’m no longer alive 
In my head I have fallen to death 

I am no longer in control of my actions 
Let alone my desires 
Neurological Science has taken over 
Nothing more will survive after this last fallen order 
Cause life now no longer gives a fuck 
I have chosen death, for death ends all pain and suffering
To kill the demons hiding inside me….

Dont worry I'm not suicidal haha, I was in the past but I figured i'd write lyrics to a song to try and explain what suicide is like to those who've not experienced it and to just spread awareness of it. Generally though I like to write poetry and lyrics in my spare time. This is one of them. 

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This is awesome, I have been listening to a lot of slipknot lately so I kinda read this as if they were singing it. Really good and I love the imagery it leaves me with, like a battlefield. Awesome. :D 

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