Ryuji Posted March 17, 2016 Share Posted March 17, 2016 Guidelines Keep it under 1000 words. Entries will end at the end of March 31st. A voter poll will be set up for one week from April 1st - April 7th. The winner will receive a badge, and entry members will receive a participant badge. As always, just keep in mind the forum guidelines before posting. Your options for themes: Sadness or Happiness. (In other words, if you choose Sadness, you want to make your audience cry and if you choose Happiness, you want to make your audience laugh.) Format for submission: Title: Theme: Entry: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evil Bunny of Doom Posted March 17, 2016 Share Posted March 17, 2016 Your options for themes: Sadness or Happiness. (In other words, if you choose Sadness, you want to make your audience cry and if you choose Happiness, you want to make your audience laugh.) or maybe make them cry so much that they start laughing at themselves for crying so much (I can't be the only one laughing maniacly while crying, right? ._. ) I'd better write something about this contest tho, cause I need the badges and points!!! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryuji Posted March 19, 2016 Author Share Posted March 19, 2016 (edited) This is inspired by Clannad. Title: Broken Heart Theme: Sadness Entry: How could it be? That I've lost so much in life. How could it be? That I'm still alive. Amidst all this pain Amidst my broken heart Why am I here at all? Then I think back And remember the time we shared That light in your eyes Gave me strength Gave me courage To face the world again I really loved you Then we had a child and on the day of her birth You, you passed away And I was destroyed Fell into a great depression For the next five years. During, all that time, Your parents raised our child And then one day, They made me reunite with her She looks so much like you It really hurts to see her Yet I love her so much Then she falls sick Just like her mother did And I hold close Until she dies and Leaves me All alone in the world How can I go on? How could it be? That I've lost so much in life. How could it be? That I'm still alive. Amidst all this pain Amidst my broken heart I miss you both so much! Edited March 19, 2016 by Guest 2 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evil Bunny of Doom Posted March 19, 2016 Share Posted March 19, 2016 I-it's not like I found it sad or anything.... b-baka onii-san! you got inspiration from Clannad, didn't you onii-san? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryuji Posted March 19, 2016 Author Share Posted March 19, 2016 I-it's not like I found it sad or anything.... b-baka onii-san! you got inspiration from Clannad, didn't you onii-san? Yep. (That's what is in the Spoiler tag) xP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evil Bunny of Doom Posted March 19, 2016 Share Posted March 19, 2016 Yep. (That's what is in the Spoiler tag) xP I didn't click it I was actually plannigt to go with a poem, too since I love writting them (it's the only thing I can write tbh).... and man, are they depressing or what I rarely include themes like the loss of loved ones like you did, though. My poems are depressing on a personal level... old habits die hard 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryuji Posted March 19, 2016 Author Share Posted March 19, 2016 I didn't click it I was actually plannigt to go with a poem, too since I love writting them (it's the only thing I can write tbh).... and man, are they depressing or what I rarely include themes like the loss of loved ones like you did, though. My poems are depressing on a personal level... old habits die hard I look forward to reading your entry! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Higanbana Posted March 19, 2016 Share Posted March 19, 2016 (edited) i actually suck at poetry and after viewing ryujis poem i was like screw it but here it is anyway.it wont make you cry tho Title: You Theme: Loneliness/sadiness Entry: Mirrors What do you reflect? Do you exaggerate Or Reflect the truth? Where is my true worth? Outside or Inside Do I lie? You? Am I stranger? What do you say? I? I don’t know. anymore Edited March 19, 2016 by Guest 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davis Posted March 19, 2016 Share Posted March 19, 2016 I look forward to reading your entry! that was beautiful *_* unfortunately i can't write anything good at all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angelic2004 Posted March 21, 2016 Share Posted March 21, 2016 Guidelines Keep it under 1000 words. Entries will end at the end of March 31st. A voter poll will be set up for one week from April 1st - April 7th. The winner will receive a badge, and entry members will receive a participant badge. As always, just keep in mind the forum guidelines before posting. Your options for themes: Sadness or Happiness. (In other words, if you choose Sadness, you want to make your audience cry and if you choose Happiness, you want to make your audience laugh.) Format for submission: Title: Theme: Entry: Does it have to be a peom or it doesn't really matter ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryuji Posted March 21, 2016 Author Share Posted March 21, 2016 Does it have to be a peom or it doesn't really matter ? As long as it is less than 1000 words, it doesn't matter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angelic2004 Posted March 21, 2016 Share Posted March 21, 2016 As long as it is less than 1000 words, it doesn't matter. ....ah ok thank you Now time to switch on my brain 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryuji Posted March 21, 2016 Author Share Posted March 21, 2016 ....ah ok thank you Now time to switch on my brain I look forward to reading your entry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angelic2004 Posted March 21, 2016 Share Posted March 21, 2016 (edited) Title:Goodbye Theme: Sadness Entry: Every time, when I looked at you my heart skipped a beat. I felt the sun on my face and I thought I had wings to fly high in the blue sky. I could've endure the pain when you were by my side. Oh how your hair flows in the wind and your smile which lit up like city lights. How your eyes seemed to see everything. This feeling, my desire for you grows stronger day by day. I thought that you were my everything, my destiny, my fate but suddenly everything changed. You left me alone to cry on the hard and cold floor. You were standing there, laughing as if you've done this before. How I've loved you and how I wanted you but now I know that the person that made me blush and made me happy was just a fantasy, nothing more but a dream. I loved you....You were my antidote to my sadness and loneliness. I wish I could turn back time and avoid meeting you, the person who would break me into pieces like glass. But now it's too late, for now I bid farewell to this world, to the people I've met, to the nice granny who was sweet and kind, to the children that came over for tea, goodbye. Goodbye to the shining stars that light up in the night.....goodbye. Edited March 22, 2016 by Guest 2 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angelic2004 Posted March 21, 2016 Share Posted March 21, 2016 I look forward to reading your entry Please don't ...... for I have low expectations for myself as I'm doing this for fun Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bakaath Posted March 23, 2016 Share Posted March 23, 2016 Title:Goodbye Theme: Sadness Entry: Every time, when I looked at you my heart skipped a beat. I felt the sun on my face and I thought I had wings to fly high in the blue sky. I could've endure the pain when you were by my side. Oh how your hair flows in the wind and your smile which lit up like city lights. How your eyes seemed to see everything. This feeling, my desire for you grows stronger day by day. I thought that you were my everything, my destiny, my fate but suddenly everything changed. You left me alone to cry on the hard and cold floor. You were standing there, laughing as if you've done this before. How I've loved you and how I wanted you but now I know that the person that made me blush and made me happy was just a fantasy, nothing more but a dream. I loved you....You were my antidote to my sadness and loneliness. I wish I could turn back time and avoid meeting you, the person who would break me into pieces like glass. But now it's too late, for now I bid farewell to this world, to the people I've met, to the nice granny who was sweet and kind, to the children that came over for tea, goodbye. Goodbye to the shining stars that light up in the night.....goodbye. Woh! What is that, a song? I literally sang it! It's pretty nice tbh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angelic2004 Posted March 23, 2016 Share Posted March 23, 2016 Woh! What is that, a song? I literally sang it! It's pretty nice tbh. Not intended to be like a song Just a paragraph of something sad I actually did write it as a song. I just don't know how to write music. Thanks! I think she meant me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryuji Posted March 23, 2016 Author Share Posted March 23, 2016 (edited) I think she meant me That's what happens when I'm not paying attention xP Edited March 23, 2016 by Guest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angelic2004 Posted March 23, 2016 Share Posted March 23, 2016 That's what happens when I"m not paying attention xP It happens sometimes 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evil Bunny of Doom Posted March 23, 2016 Share Posted March 23, 2016 Bunny is pissed because she can't submit some of her favourite poems since they don't fit with either of the themes D: Title: Illusions Theme: Sadness Entry: ok prepare yourselves for a lot of weirndess, my poems never make any sense Burried in the sand Out in the empty desert A fullmoon rises Above the mountain peaks Only to fall back to the ground Shattered by its fate I could swear I saw you Your shadow was dancing With the winter breeze Graceful and hollow Torn into pieces And carried by the wind No one knows about my dream Wide as the universe it was Filled with galaxies and suns That orbit around your dreams Endless and lonely Bleeding in pain Why did I let you fall In the blackness of your heart Breaking the threads You gently weaved From the raindrops You gathered in the skies? There's no escape from greed and pride Hell is waiting for us both Our dreams were sins And the wind was the devil We sank into the darkness Abandoned by the world 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bakaath Posted March 24, 2016 Share Posted March 24, 2016 (edited) @Ryuji -san I tried to sing yours and I can't seem to find a matching tune for it. Edited March 24, 2016 by Guest 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryuji Posted March 31, 2016 Author Share Posted March 31, 2016 Today is the last day to enter the March Writing Contest! The voting will begin tomorrow! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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