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Gabriel Shaughnessy

What do you think about this African Animations?

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Very nice animation! I think the style is good, the movements can look a bit strange at times, but the art itself is well done. I think the writing could have been better; the story flow feels clunky and there was not any narration or explanation of the setting. I think it can be surmised they are on a class trip of some sort, but that is entirely unclear.


I don't know what style this is aiming for but I think it could benefit from some more storytelling to accompany the animation. Just letting actions play out doesn't let me feel much of a connection to the characters.

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