ItsSammy Posted April 10, 2019 Share Posted April 10, 2019 When the Ocean Met the Sky Have you ever seen a sky so clear? Morning sun and clouds disappear Over the hills just to get here 'Bout a journeys worth of fear Written on the faces come near Too scared to touch the glass Too scared to think fast And when they come in last Nobody will remember the past For their names don't make the cast Have you ever seen the ocean such a dark blue? Sapphire and midnight, a magical hue Across the ocean just to find it next to you 'Bout a life's worth of fear cuts right through Your pounding heart that's already mildew Now you've become a god in a strange sort of way So now that you're here, they're about to pay Ignorance is no excuse, no, no excuse today Let's see how they feel when they're cast away Society looks down on the crimson lined tray You broke the mold and changed the clay Your name, blood red, on the cast of this play Poetry recited, eyes unblinking in the fray How beautifully you speak with eloquence on display A morning sky as blue as the ocean's waves Last thing they saw before going to their graves And in the night the waters come crashing from the caves No longer to be kept on hold, like unholy sapphire slaves Ocean met the sky, sundown Blood in the waves, might drown Crimson red rain, on the town Bloody one, wears the crown. 1 2 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SAO LILDOOP Posted April 10, 2019 Share Posted April 10, 2019 Man, this poem is actually freakin' awesome; my favorite poem I have read of yours! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ItsSammy Posted April 10, 2019 Author Share Posted April 10, 2019 Thank you @SAO LILDOOP, I'm glad you liked it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Geano Posted April 11, 2019 Share Posted April 11, 2019 This is amazing, and it flows very well too if I may say so. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ItsSammy Posted April 12, 2019 Author Share Posted April 12, 2019 Thanks for the feedback @ArchieKun, I am glad you enjoyed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Geano Posted April 12, 2019 Share Posted April 12, 2019 13 hours ago, ItsSammy said: Thanks for the feedback @ArchieKun, I am glad you enjoyed it. Anytime I love writing, and poetry is always fun. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Myouya Posted April 24, 2019 Share Posted April 24, 2019 What a very eloquent set of wording and rhymes. I should be attending here more often than I currently do, I am missing much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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