MeandMyImaginaryFriends

So this is my first time really trying to edit any game play to this caliber. I am currently playing Yakuza Kiwami and it's been a wild ride of a game. I do find that it has some slow moments so I have to skip some of those sections. I would really appreciate it if someone told me what I can do to make this better or if at all they like the pace of my editting.

Also I realize that I need a better thumbnail for this video, I haven't even made this public yet so I need to do that.