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awesomedude20

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28 minutes ago, Nono said:

Well that's seven minutes I won't ever get back.

Jk bro!! It was great. Seemed a little rushed though. A couple more minutes would be very welcome by me. Need more info on the mom.

 

By the way, is that drake in your avatar? @awesomedude20

I find the pacing was fine. We knew that the mother was busy with work and away, so the story could focus on the dad and daughter. Iunno

 

And nah, that's me lol

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