I wrote a thing x2

[Sakura]

I've managed to find time to write more lately so I guess I've just been writing what I feel, no real rhyme pattern to it so I don't think you can call it poetry so much as simply feelings. 
About someone who I will miss the rest of my life, and they may never know it.

I've searched long and hard,
For words to speak,
To describe these feelings held for you,
For a thought excluding you.

For a night in the stillness,
Without tear filled eyes,
Without a heart that aches,
Without arms that reach for a man they cannot hold.

This girl who is still not over you,
Dreams of your smile, and your kiss she so longs to feel.
Dreams of entwined fingers,
Dreams telling her one day this will be real.

I don't believe in fairytales anymore,
But I believe in happily ever after with you.
Forever in your arms,
And a life by your side.

Even if your arms are too far to reach,
And your voice cannot be heard,
Even if in this darkness I will wait forever to see you again, 
Even if when we reunite you tell me you don't love me the same way you did back then...

I won't regret a moment,
Or think it was time lost,
I know that's simply the cost,
Of words left unspoken.
A heart that is eternally broken.
 

[Animedragon]

4 hours ago, Sakura said:

I've managed to find time to write more lately so I guess I've just been writing what I feel, no real rhyme pattern to it so I don't think you can call it poetry so much as simply feelings. 
About someone who I will miss the rest of my life, and they may never know it.

I've searched long and hard,
For words to speak,
To describe these feelings held for you,
For a thought excluding you.

For a night in the stillness,
Without tear filled eyes,
Without a heart that aches,
Without arms that reach for a man they cannot hold.

This girl who is still not over you,
Dreams of your smile, and your kiss she so longs to feel.
Dreams of entwined fingers,
Dreams telling her one day this will be real.

I don't believe in fairytales anymore,
But I believe in happily ever after with you.
Forever in your arms,
And a life by your side.

Even if your arms are too far to reach,
And your voice cannot be heard,
Even if in this darkness I will wait forever to see you again, 
Even if when we reunite you tell me you don't love me the same way you did back then...

I won't regret a moment,
Or think it was time lost,
I know that's simply the cost,
Of words left unspoken.
A heart that is eternally broken.
 

That's such a beautiful poem, it bought tears to my eyes reading it.

[Sasuke]

That's very moving and deep, I know there's a lot of emotion behind it since I'm probably correct in who I think it's about and what it's about. Hugs for you

[Zeref]

Beautiful, you always write well and this is no exception. I hope you keep writing again because I always liked to read them when you would finish them. 

[Sakura]

Thank you @Animedragon and @Zeref I'm glad you liked it. I hope I can write something else again sometime soon, something that isn't so sad lol

11 hours ago, Sasuke said:

That's very moving and deep, I know there's a lot of emotion behind it since I'm probably correct in who I think it's about and what it's about. Hugs for you

Yeah you are and it is lol 

[Sasuke]

17 hours ago, Sakura said:

Thank you @Animedragon and @Zeref I'm glad you liked it. I hope I can write something else again sometime soon, something that isn't so sad lol

Yeah you are and it is lol 

I hope you can write something happy sometime soon.

[Sakura]

18 hours ago, Sasuke said:

I hope you can write something happy sometime soon.

I'm sure I'll be able to

[Sasuke]

On 10/30/2024 at 11:14 AM, Sakura said:

I'm sure I'll be able to

I can't wait to read that.

[Sarada]

This one is even more sad than the other  

[DylanMax]

On 10/28/2024 at 4:26 AM, Sakura said:

I've managed to find time to write more lately so I guess I've just been writing what I feel, no real rhyme pattern to it so I don't think you can call it poetry so much as simply feelings. 
About someone who I will miss the rest of my life, and they may never know it.

I've searched long and hard,
For words to speak,
To describe these feelings held for you,
For a thought excluding you.

For a night in the stillness,
Without tear filled eyes,
Without a heart that aches,
Without arms that reach for a man they cannot hold.

This girl who is still not over you,
Dreams of your smile, and your kiss she so longs to feel.
Dreams of entwined fingers,
Dreams telling her one day this will be real.

I don't believe in fairytales anymore,
But I believe in happily ever after with you.
Forever in your arms,
And a life by your side.

Even if your arms are too far to reach,
And your voice cannot be heard,
Even if in this darkness I will wait forever to see you again, 
Even if when we reunite you tell me you don't love me the same way you did back then...

I won't regret a moment,
Or think it was time lost,
I know that's simply the cost,
Of words left unspoken.
A heart that is eternally broken.
 

Wow, this is raw and beautiful. You’ve poured so much emotion into it and it’s clear how deeply you feel for this person. Even if it doesn’t follow a strict structure, it’s still poetry because it comes from the heart. The longing, the hope, the ache, it’s all so relatable. Keep writing like this,  it’s powerful stuff. And hey, sometimes the most honest art comes from just letting your feelings flow. 

On 10/28/2024 at 4:56 PM, Sasuke said:

That's very moving and deep, I know there's a lot of emotion behind it since I'm probably correct in who I think it's about and what it's about. Hugs for you

I know right

[Sakura]

On 1/30/2025 at 5:44 AM, DylanMax said:

Wow, this is raw and beautiful. You’ve poured so much emotion into it and it’s clear how deeply you feel for this person. Even if it doesn’t follow a strict structure, it’s still poetry because it comes from the heart. The longing, the hope, the ache, it’s all so relatable. Keep writing like this,  it’s powerful stuff. And hey, sometimes the most honest art comes from just letting your feelings flow. 

I know right

Thank you <33

I usually just write what my feelings are at the time and don't really look to follow rules of poetry or anything, it's been a good way to express myself. 

[FidelityBoss]

On 10/28/2024 at 4:26 AM, Sakura said:

I've managed to find time to write more lately so I guess I've just been writing what I feel, no real rhyme pattern to it so I don't think you can call it poetry so much as simply feelings. 
About someone who I will miss the rest of my life, and they may never know it.

I've searched long and hard,
For words to speak,
To describe these feelings held for you,
For a thought excluding you.

For a night in the stillness,
Without tear filled eyes,
Without a heart that aches,
Without arms that reach for a man they cannot hold.

This girl who is still not over you,
Dreams of your smile, and your kiss she so longs to feel.
Dreams of entwined fingers,
Dreams telling her one day this will be real.

I don't believe in fairytales anymore,
But I believe in happily ever after with you.
Forever in your arms,
And a life by your side.

Even if your arms are too far to reach,
And your voice cannot be heard,
Even if in this darkness I will wait forever to see you again, 
Even if when we reunite you tell me you don't love me the same way you did back then...

I won't regret a moment,
Or think it was time lost,
I know that's simply the cost,
Of words left unspoken.
A heart that is eternally broken.
 

This is beautifully raw, more like emotions put straight to paper than just words. It reads like poetry to me, even if that wasn’t the intention. The longing, the what-ifs, and the acceptance of heartbreak all hit deep. Feels like something meant to be whispered into the night.

[Sakura]

10 hours ago, FidelityBoss said:

This is beautifully raw, more like emotions put straight to paper than just words. It reads like poetry to me, even if that wasn’t the intention. The longing, the what-ifs, and the acceptance of heartbreak all hit deep. Feels like something meant to be whispered into the night.

Thank you  
That pretty much covers what I was going through when I wrote it lol ~ missing someone very deeply that I cared about very much & never told them, and pretty much just having to live with it the rest of my life I imagine. Writing things like this have helped me deal with it and to attempt to move on from it. 

Edited February 4 by Sakura

[DylanMax]

On 2/1/2025 at 5:01 AM, Sakura said:

Thank you <33

I usually just write what my feelings are at the time and don't really look to follow rules of poetry or anything, it's been a good way to express myself. 

If that's what works for you then it's best you stick with it as the end results are beautiful.

[Sakura]

12 hours ago, DylanMax said:

If that's what works for you then it's best you stick with it as the end results are beautiful.

Thanks ~! I'm working on writing something new now actually ^^

[FidelityBoss]

On 2/4/2025 at 5:01 AM, Sakura said:

Thank you  
That pretty much covers what I was going through when I wrote it lol ~ missing someone very deeply that I cared about very much & never told them, and pretty much just having to live with it the rest of my life I imagine. Writing things like this have helped me deal with it and to attempt to move on from it. 

Writing can be such a powerful way to process emotions, it’s like therapy but with more metaphors. It’s brave to channel those feelings into something creative. Keep writing through it; the words help more than you know.